Shawn played a similar video to this at a conference I was at in Melbourne about a month ago. Barack Obama tells a story. The story he tells is very well known in the US but comparatively unseen here in Australia. He used it many times when he was campaigning for the presidency. I defy people to watch it and be untouched. This time he actually had Edith Childs there - but many times it was just him telling the story.
I think it's great example of the use of narrative in public speaking - so I'm just going to make a few notes about it:
- It's a story based on true events, not a fable or a fiction - altho there is some dispute by other participants as to details.
- It's told in the first person, Obama (our narrator) is a character in the story.
- It is slyly self-deprecating. He is tricked into doing something. He is crabby when he comes to the meeting. In other words, the narrator is a normal person.
- It is about an everyday event. It is not about an epic moment in American history - it is about something quite commonplace - a small act by someone that has a big effect on him. It is a situation that many of the audience members can relate to.
- The story is contained in time & space. It is not his life story, it is not the history of American civil rights. It is focused.
- The little details matter - for me it was the reference to Edith Childs' hats. Little details can convince us of the plausibility of a story.
- It ends with a call to action that is consonant with the story itself.
- It's also quite a long story (8 mins approx) and it takes place near the end of Obama's speech after he's built up some rapport with the audience.
- Obama has obviously spent some time in Church. His delivery is reminiscent of a pentecostal preacher.
- What do you see & hear? What have I missed?
But reflect on what touched you in the story. Where were you gripped? Where did it meander? Why?
Also there are other versions of Obama telling this story on the campaign trail - and each is a little different. If you're really keen, try finding those too and have a look.






